Wednesday 8 August 2018

A long time ago there was a girl named Jordayne and her rhino pack  called the ellipsis. They loved to go on adventures and travel around the world looking for treasure. One day they came to a city that looked like it was abandoned. They started to place their tents by the border and were amazed by all the wonderful food, water, and technology still in the city. As they went inside they saw a ghost. The ghost chased them from the building screaming “Never come back or I will murder you!”. So they sprinted outside and decided to go to sleep amongst the  huge sand dunes because it was so dark.

The next day they planned a way to get their treasure of tvs, chromebook and hp’s. So they set off and got people from a nearby village, they were called  handyman. We told them if you come out alive and we get the treasure you can get some. So they said yes. The people from the village went in side and made the ghost sliver out so we can get the treasure and run as fast as we could away       

“Charge!” she screamed, feeling might atop the lead rhinoceros. He jolted with every step they took, the rhino’s feet punching into the baking hot sand,sending up large clouds into the humid air so that he could taste the grains of the sand in his parched mouth.

She woke up and to her delight of her mum,all of that was just a horrible dream that she had at home. The end

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